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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
Jess
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| um... never mind, i read. lolz |
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Badim Soilding
Orrion Carn
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| Posted: Sat, August 14th 2010 12:31am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Orrion, take the Zealot, you can use it as a ship. I'm not sure where it is right now on the forums tho, you may have to find it. also, for proprieties sake you might want to talk to tseneca about using it. LOL. |
Oh Alex and I were planning on using that to get some Republic prisoners out, so that might be something for Lucas. Badim, Clare and H6 are just going to be taking public transport, instead of just going to Thyferra, again on public transport, walk all the way back to the commune, and then board the ship 
They should be able to meet back up with Tseneca and the gang and travel together. Though, that's your call. Kinda hate the idea of 'splitting', unless there's a good reason for it. Like Felucia and Cato Neimoidia were good reasons, but we quickly met back up which I like. Anyways, you're call on that, if you were implying a longer split than normal.
| Quote: | | okay, so I'm just going to interject a little. This isn't judgment or criticism, just friendly advice. Its very hard to play with someone who has his plot so planned out. even knowing some events in advance and pre-writing them, and then fixing them for circumstances can make co-oping hard for other players. I think that might be why Convictions was so difficult to play, because we all knew you had things in the bag and we didn't want to mess you up, or felt out of place. Its why, when i want something done (like emmetts death) I just do it and get it out of the way instead of relying on others to fill in the gaps. |
I catch your drift. Well, what I meant was I had the ending all planned out, not the parts in the middle. I tried to leave those as open as possible, give it a more dynamic feel. But I was implying the ending posts, not the whole thing.
| Quote: | | Just giving you some input, no hard feelings, k |
No hard feelings to begin with  
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Kyp Durron
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| Posted: Sat, August 14th 2010 12:44am Post subject: |
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I have my own plans set for the time between now and hopefully Bespin. I must agree it was very difficult to play my role since I knew I could not do anything to upset the plot. I managed to get a few wise words in there but that was all  .
I imagine the remaining crew will be boarding the Escrow, so I will make a short post of Kyp's reaction to Badim leaving and then we're going to have a shin dig at Naboo.
.....damn gungans.
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Sat, August 14th 2010 03:45am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | I must agree it was very difficult to play my role since I knew I could not do anything to upset the plot. I managed to get a few wise words in there but that was all . |
I'm sorry to the both of you, I thought I was giving you guys the space/opportunity you needed to make a post with the teams splitting up. Guess I was wrong
Anyways, just to clarify, I didn't write the plot in pre-written posts. I wasn't like:
{Write post with Badim}
{Leave space for Jess to respond, have backup ready}
{Write post with Sara}
{Leave space for anyone to pitch in, have backup ready}
No no, I only pre-write something, possibly sheerly out of boredom on slow days, when I get hit with inspiration, or if I already have a situation predetermined. Like, I knew that so and so was going to happen with the Badim Rescue plot, but I altered it with additions and such to the changing situations and such, constantly.
I also pre-write a post when it's completely away from the rest of the crew, and something important between my characters, like Badim and Clare with their first night together after the Badim Rescue plot.
Point is with this, I only pre-write posts when it's an important event, I don't want to rush it and take my time on it (Like, I know for a fact that Badim and Clare will have their first night together after the Badim rescue plot, so I get to work on it, refine it and make it at least an above average post of mine for when we get to that point, adding some stuff along the way as well), or if it's for the end of a plot, where I know the predeteremined end to it (Like, I knew Jelahan was going to die, just not by Badim's hand, and he was going to leave. I left it open how we got there, which is why I was glad we went to Felucia and Thyferra, gave me a chance to expand the options for Badim on Jelahan's fate, and have it feel less linear than it was up until the end of it)
So, pre-written posts from me = Specific event or Plot end. Nothing in the middle, nothing at the start.
Just something where I personally want to go out with a bang and make what I hope is a good post, and to allow me more thinking room rather than an hour or so to make a post, before my oppotunity passes.
No hard feelings, and I welcome criticism (good or bad) and actually crave bad ones, seeing as how it helps improve me as a whole. Thanks for the concerns (If I just hear 'Good job!' on every freaking post, with no error, I'm just going to be staying at that level, no experience from a lesson or two gained)
I'll refrain from doing pre-written posts, though, it does help me get a deeper post in that I can't seem to do in a small timeframe, at least not without a S**tload of errors on my end, which I'm too much of a grammer freak to let slip past and eventually have 15 edits on my posts
I even edit posts from months before because of it! What a weirdo I am! LOL!
EDIT: Dammit, spelt criticism wrong and I had to edit GRAMMER FREAK! SEE!?! LOL! j/k
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 02:56am Post subject: |
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Probably unwanted, but...
WHERE'D YOU ALL GO!?! I HAVE BEEN SITTING AT MY COMPUTER FOR DAYS... FOR HOURS AT A TIME... FOR ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!!! LOL!
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Kyp Durron
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 05:26am Post subject: |
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I've been around, here and there.
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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 10:31am Post subject: |
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I... have a life. LoL
busy weekend. |
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 11:45am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | I... have a life. LoL |
Yes... Yes you do.
lol. Busy weekend for you guys, easily understandable. I have those too from time to time 
But still, on my days off I'm just bored as Hell! SA NA TANA AW! (Get the reference and I'll give out a free, calorie and carb free cookie!)
EDIT: Holy Crap, Jess! That post with Firi and Dex was awesome!
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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 12:02pm Post subject: |
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| haha, thanks. I was gonna wait longer, but i figured what the hell. Firi's never done it before either, so i wanted to make it romantic. LOL. |
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 12:23pm Post subject: |
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LOL! Same thing with Badim and Clare. But I saw it was the perfect moment for them.
Though, I might be putting in yet another surprising moment for the two of them, though not on a scale as Clare's 'Death'. But we'll see, I've got too many ideas in my head to juggle around right now 
You read the flashback post with Badim, Jess?
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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 04:53pm Post subject: |
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Just did. That's awesome, the only thing i object to is her in an imperial uniform. other then that, i love it.
I have to stay with tseneca in the present for now, but i enjoy reading these, there's a huge gap between leaving Issards fleet and meeting Lucas where i have nothing planned, so no worries with me rejecting any of your posts. LOL. |
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 04:59pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | the only thing i object to is her in an imperial uniform. |
Any suggestions? I'll make an edit before I leave for work.
But thanks! Yeah, I wasn't really satisfied with the summary on Thyferra. Yeah, rough outline, but I didn't have the time to write a whole flashback until now
(And don't worry about rejecting anything, this involves Tseneca too, so if anything seems out of place, just let me know )
You get the PM I sent you a week ago on my horrible singing?
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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 05:08pm Post subject: |
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it was cute, the singing. not bad, just don't go on american idol.
I don't care, she wears tunics and such. not a big deal. what did you think of the last tseneca post? |
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Mon, August 16th 2010 05:27pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | it was cute, the singing. not bad, just don't go on american idol. |
LOL! Not planning on it
| Quote: | | I don't care, she wears tunics and such. not a big deal. |
Alright, I'll get that in when I get back from work.
| Quote: | | what did you think of the last tseneca post? |
Great post. I'll get a Sara post up tonight with them arriving in the hotel or something.
Cya guys when I get back at 10 PM Pacific Time tonight!
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Tue, August 17th 2010 02:13am Post subject: |
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I love how Sara just isn't getting a break with the FS thing Though, I'm keeping it to the possiblity of it be like a pressure sensor in a bed, or the glass falling over in her room when The Escrow lifted off, until it's approved.
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Tue, August 17th 2010 11:20am Post subject: |
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Nice post with Sethe, Tseneca and Kleiia, Alex and Jess! I'll see what posts I can get done after I wake up a bit more.
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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
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| Posted: Tue, August 17th 2010 12:41pm Post subject: |
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| LOL, i'm having fun reading your posts with me in them, Orrion. LOL |
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Tue, August 17th 2010 01:19pm Post subject: |
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LOL! Thanks! I'm having fun writing it
I've always loved flashbacks, fleshs out of a complex character (Badim, in a way), got so complex in the first place lol
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| Posted: Tue, August 17th 2010 02:16pm Post subject: |
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Yeah! I loved Sethe finding out she was pregnant. It was cool transition between characters too! Like starting with Sethe, then Tseneca.
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Tue, August 17th 2010 02:46pm Post subject: |
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Same here! Nice posts
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Wed, August 18th 2010 03:00am Post subject: |
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Sorry for the double post
Jess, I just finished the flashback with Tseneca and Badim. I had Tseneca mention that Emmett was an imperial officer because Badim asked, when he first joined, if Emmett was still with the Empire.
Just point out any objections and I'll make an edit
This was fun writing it, now I'm going to bed. Good night!
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| Posted: Wed, August 18th 2010 05:16am Post subject: |
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Good posts.
All right, so I'm ready to leave Naboo whenever. Once Tseneca/Lucas/Jonas agree to keep the silence, they'll be allowed to leave the palace. Then we can do whatever. Um, yeahhhh. I have tomorrow off so I can post a little bit more, and since I'm sick, I'll be home. yyaaayyyy.... minus the time spent driving to TRAFFIC COURT... again.
grrrr.
oh well. |
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Tseneca Lowry-Fink
Jess
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| Posted: Wed, August 18th 2010 10:35am Post subject: |
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TRAFFIC COURT!?!?! Alex, how many times have I told you not to text and drive? LOL
I'm cool with leaving Naboo, but where are we going? and what trouble are we going to get into? |
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Badim Soilding
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| Posted: Wed, August 18th 2010 12:17pm Post subject: |
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>_< Alex, Alex, Alex...Tsk Tsk Tsk lol
I'm cool with leaving Naboo as well, though I was kinda hoping for Sara to get her FS approved while she was on Naboo, others find out and take off.
I'll make post with Sara after Sethe or the others do, heading to the Palace for the others I'm assuming.
| Quote: | | what trouble are we going to get into? |
My question exactly 
lol...Let me see if I can't come up with anything...
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Kyp Durron
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| Posted: Wed, August 18th 2010 02:31pm Post subject: |
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I have something I can do on Coruscant and Deyer but I was hoping to hold the latter of the two for right before Bespin, if said conference goes through.
Btw Badim both your apps have been accepted.
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