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Lyle Loars
Alex


Joined: 19 Jun 2010
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 Post Posted: Sat, June 19th 2010 02:53am    Post subject: Application for Lyle Loars
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Player Nickname: Alex
MSNIM: calias2@hotmail.com

Name: Lyle Lars
Age: 62
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Homeworld: Alderaan
Desired Faction: Freelance
Desired Occupation: Owner of the "New Nyss Shipyards"
Force Sensitivity: None
Anything you'd like to tell us about the character:
Owns the space station "New Nyss Shipyards", basically a port for the criminal elite. (Located near a strange star which successfully conceals its location.)

The reason I'm applying for this character, is that I need more down-time with Nico. I can't have her blowing up things ALL the time. He'll be a guide and a spiritual voice to her already destructive lifestyle. I can see him becoming useful in many of our journeys. New Nyss Shipyards will be seized and Lyle captured by the True Empire three months into "The Invasion" by Commander Selena Krauss.

Summarized Biography:
Lyle Loars grew up on Alderaan, though was fortunate enough to be on a business trip with his father when the Death Star arrived to vanquish his people. Lyle became obsessive on creating the "perfect map", and knowing the ins and outs of the galaxy. Hired by Emperor Palpatine, Loars used the Empire to further his own agenda of obtaining hidden hyper space conduits and strange galactic phenomenon.

Lyle began to submerge into the criminal underworld, finding tremendous profits on the blackmarket for selling locations and maps to vast, and usually untouched resources. He eventually purchased and recreated the Nyss Shipyards after their destruction. Only key souls in the galaxy would know where to find him.

In 39 ABY, Vera Nico was one of the privileged few, a short list of 167 names, to get a docking pass.

Lyle Loars, given his time with Palpatine's Empire, remains one of the greatest navigators of all time.
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Kastor Antilles
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Joined: 14 Jun 2009
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 Post Posted: Tue, June 22nd 2010 01:07am    Post subject:
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Hey Alex,

First off, CMAC needs a bit of clarification. Is his name Lyle Loars, or Lyle Lars? :p

Also, if he was a navigator for Palpatine, the age doesn't work. He would have been no older than 12 by the time Palpatine died. So, could you rework that?

Thanks!
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Lyle Loars
Alex


Joined: 19 Jun 2010
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 Post Posted: Wed, June 23rd 2010 06:29pm    Post subject:
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Kastor Antilles wrote:
Is his name Lyle Loars, or Lyle Lars?

Loars, LOL.

Kastor Antilles wrote:
Also, if he was a navigator for Palpatine, the age doesn't work. He would have been no older than 12 by the time Palpatine died. So, could you rework that?

Thanks!


Done. Made him 23 at the time, I believe.
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Senna Vucora
Zara


Joined: 19 Jun 2009
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 Post Posted: Thu, July 01st 2010 02:37am    Post subject:
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Well, with that worked out, application approved! :)
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