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Kastor Antilles
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 Post Posted: Sun, July 19th 2009 01:53am    Post subject: The backstory is up!
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Recent history of the galaxy is up! :) Hopefully I didn't write it too complicated. There's a lot more to fill out yet, including some of the links in the Wiki; so, for now, please don't add any pages relating to anything in that page, since CMAC needs to iron out any small details yet. However, the backstory that's there is not going changed, and it can be used to plan your characters. :D

Feel free to ask any questions in here. Enjoy, guys!
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 Post Posted: Sun, July 19th 2009 02:32pm    Post subject:
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Now, we're sure there will be no last minute revisions? :p
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 03:11am    Post subject:
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There's two errors in the first line of the Imperial reforms bit.

Muunilinst has a silent n in it and
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Although the attack is generally regarded as unsuccessfully

should have unsuccessful at the end instead of unsuccessfully.
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 12:30pm    Post subject:
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I suppose it's a good thing that the only complaints were grammar. :p
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 12:58pm    Post subject:
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Wow, I'm glad you commented on the important plot events that everyone's been asking for. :p

Fixed.
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 10:33pm    Post subject:
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Its an OCD thing ... even small errors bug me,

Least it means that someone read it :P
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 10:39pm    Post subject:
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I just saw a ghost forum...there was a board named the War Room, but when I refreshed the page it was gone.
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 10:46pm    Post subject:
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You saw nothing! Nothing!
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 11:03pm    Post subject:
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Tehehe Amsie forgot to assign permissions to said forum after he created it?
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I know nuffink! Narrfink!
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 11:12pm    Post subject:
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Amsie didn't create it. :p
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 11:23pm    Post subject:
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Well, once I moved my entire Krytocracy asset sheet into the off-topic forum... :P
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:39pm    Post subject:
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So, no questions on the storyline from the new guys? :)
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:40pm    Post subject:
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Nah, it's pretty clear
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:41pm    Post subject:
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Thanks. :D
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:50pm    Post subject:
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Nope, pretty straight forward. Think I may have come across a typo or two, but..... :P
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:51pm    Post subject:
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Yeah, there's still some typos... so who's in charge of character applications?
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:52pm    Post subject:
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Group thing. The group is not all on. So... :p
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:54pm    Post subject:
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Riiiight.
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 02:56pm    Post subject:
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Well, a quarter of CMAC is at work, three-quarters are engaged in other setup duties. And the quarter that's away really likes doing apps, so... should be caught up tonight. :D
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 08:22pm    Post subject:
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What about the quarter that is here :P
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 11:47pm    Post subject:
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Nope, pretty straight forward. Think I may have come across a typo or two, but.....


I re-read the whole article a couple nights ago. I corrected one typo, and I didn't see any others. So, I'd be grateful if you told me where the typos are. :D
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American English doesn't count as a typo, by the way. >_>
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 Post Posted: Tue, August 04th 2009 11:58pm    Post subject:
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I never said there were a lot, only remember coming across a couple. You're probably good if you read through it though. :)
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 Post Posted: Wed, August 05th 2009 12:05am    Post subject:
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I only remember one, but I don't remember much except that it was a u instead of an o or something. Wasn't too important, I still understood the article. It was in one of the paragraphs that had to do with either Daala or Zend... I think.
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