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Shen Velez
Orrion Carn


Joined: 28 May 2010
Posts: 5
Location: CR-90 Trucemaker

 Post Posted: Fri, May 28th 2010 03:38am    Post subject: Application for Shen Velez
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Player Nickname (will be displayed under your account name): Orrion Carn
MSNIM: ryoman5@hotmail.com

Name: Shen Velez
Age: 24 - 16 ABY : 4 : 22
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Homeworld: Nar Shaddaa
Desired Faction: New Republic
Desired Occupation: Executive Officer of Gavin Darklighterís Trucemaker (Pre-arranged)
Force Sensitivity: No
Anything you'd like to tell us about the character: Long-lost brother to Clare Velez and gets stuck in the past every now and then, thinking back to the death of his family.
Summarized Biography:
Born to Kel Velez and Teela Irris-Velez in 16 ABY, he seemed to have a bright future even beneath the dim surroundings of Nar Shaddaa. A week after his fifteenth birthday, his family was attacked and murdered by the Death Order. He didnít know what to do and ran, he felt like such a coward leaving his parents and younger sister, Clare Velez behind. He fell into a depression no fifteen year old should have. He rummaged the streets for spare, fallen or stolen credits so he could get as far away from Nar Shaddaa and to not become a coward anymore. He joined the New Republic on Coruscant and was lucky to be accepted into the academy. He proved that the Republic wasnít making any mistakes allowing him entry.

He quickly became well disciplined and courageous, though he still felt emotional when someone would ask about his family. He graduated with no family to revel in his success. He became Third Lieutenant to the Carrack-class light cruiser, Pounder. He quickly caught the eye of Gavin Darklighter at the age of twenty-three and was offered a First Lieutenant position on his CR-90 Carrier Flagship, Trucemaker.

He continually thinks back nine years in the past and wanders through his memories of the day that changed his life, and tried to figure out if there was anything he could have done to change it.
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Kastor Antilles
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Joined: 14 Jun 2009
Posts: 417

 Post Posted: Sat, May 29th 2010 05:32pm    Post subject:
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Application approved! :D

Two things, though. Firstly, we were wondering if you could talk to us a little bit about that CR-90; it isn't a carrier ship, and we just wanted to make sure you understood that, so it didn't screw any of your plans up.

Secondly, you might want to change your avatar, since Jacen is already in-play in Unity; it might cause some confusion. :)

Let us know. Thanks!
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