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Jase Denora Jase
Joined: 15 Jul 2009 Posts: 360
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Posted: Wed, July 15th 2009 04:57pm Post subject: Application for Jase Denora |
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Name: Jase Denora
Age: 19 BBY
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Homeworld: Coruscant
Desired Faction: Jedi Order
Desired Occupation: Jedi Master/ Grand Master of the Denora Jedi Academy
Force Sensitivity: Yes
MSNIM: gclobo@hotmail.com
Anything you'd like to tell us about the character: You guys know how Jase is...
Summarized Biography: Born in the lowest slums of Coruscant, Jase was destined to have a killer's mindset. Every day was a struggle for survival and he watched both of is parents die individual and horrible deaths in the name of protecting their son.
Determined to leave the slums, he taught himself to fight and to kill. At the age of 15, he learned how to offer those abilities to the highest bidder. And so, he traveled the galaxy for many years, killing to make a living; and learning new ways to kill. Eventually, he discovered an ability to manipulate the Force, which had remained dormant in him, during a botched assassination attempt.
It was this discovery that was the catalyst for a change in Jase's thinking. Perhaps killing wasn't the only purpose in his life. This thought brought about a change in the way he did things. More and more, he began turning in targets that were incapacitated; and not dead. he also began taking more jobs as a security escort, rather than as an assassin.
News spread in the underworld that the lethal Jase Denora had gone soft. This prompted him to leave behind the lifestyle he had lived under permanently, lest someone try to claim a title as his killer. Taking his assets, his weapons and a few personal effects, he sold his estates and personal ship; and headed for Coruscant to master his ability in the Force under the tutelage of Luke Skywalker and the Jedi Council.
Now, at age 60, Jase holds a seat as a Master of the Council. Not only does he have a position of influence among the most elite Jedi in the galaxy; but he also runs his own Jedi academy. This academy is quite different from others, as Jase applies the lessons of his past life to the ways of the Jedi. A school of hard knocks would be an understatement.... |
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Ams Jendob Moff
Joined: 14 Jun 2009 Posts: 1579 Location: The Gala
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Posted: Sat, July 18th 2009 11:14pm Post subject: |
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Oh boy... look, don't get me wrong. As awesome as I find the idea of a Dark Jedi Saul Tigh, I think we need to hammer out some details and do some fine-tuning before this gets the CMAC seal of approval. _________________ Emperor Ams Jendob, Ruler of the Imperial Remnant
----"Moff", CMAC Dreamcrusher, Official Administrative Waldorf and Statler---- |
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Jase Denora Jase
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Posted: Sat, July 18th 2009 11:40pm Post subject: |
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Okay, send me a PM with your issues on it and I'll modify |
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Jase Denora Jase
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Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 05:27pm Post subject: |
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Edited and re-submitted for your approval |
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Jase Denora Jase
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Posted: Wed, July 22nd 2009 02:43pm Post subject: |
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Re-edited and re-re-submitted
Pretty please? |
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Ams Jendob Moff
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Posted: Wed, July 22nd 2009 03:35pm Post subject: |
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Did you get our PMs? And read them? _________________ Emperor Ams Jendob, Ruler of the Imperial Remnant
----"Moff", CMAC Dreamcrusher, Official Administrative Waldorf and Statler---- |
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Jase Denora Jase
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Posted: Wed, July 22nd 2009 04:17pm Post subject: |
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Yes; and I've edited it according to what I've compreheded from your suggestions. if it ain't up to snuff, be more specific. it'd be nice if CMAC were willing to discuss this on MSN with me.... |
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Han Solo Han
Joined: 14 Jun 2009 Posts: 461
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Posted: Wed, July 22nd 2009 05:08pm Post subject: |
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Application Approved!
CMAC will be in contact with you concerning a location for your academy. |
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