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Jahan Stresemann
Alexus


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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 06:15am    Post subject: Application for Jahan Stresemann
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Player Nickname (will be displayed under your account name): Alexus
MSNIM: You know it.

Name: Jahan Stresemann
Age: 55
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Homeworld: Ord Mantell (birth) Adarlon (raised)
Desired Faction: New Republic
Desired Occupation: Something naval, an admiral of some level if possible?
Force Sensitivity: No thanks, I'll save that for later ^_^
Anything you'd like to tell us about the character: Jahan wanted to go into politics when he was young, but didn't have the chance, so stayed in the navy. If only some crazy thing had happened, allowing him to become President of somewhere. But now he's happy with this line of work.
Summarized Biography:
SEE BELOW.

Also, WOO NEW RPG ^_^ :D XD
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Ams Jendob
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 12:27pm    Post subject:
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While I can appreciate that, if you could just put in a couple basic details, that'd be fine. The main point of the bio is to get players somewhat invested and put an end to five-minute characters intended to ram that fleet into the Big Bad's Executor and come out a hero. :p
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Kastor Antilles
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 Post Posted: Mon, July 20th 2009 01:02pm    Post subject:
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Something concise is fine, Alexus, but yes, we would like to see something. We encourage the longer biographies to be placed on the Holonet, which you can add onto as you go along.
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Jahan Stresemann
Alexus


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 Post Posted: Tue, July 21st 2009 06:46am    Post subject:
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Many apologies!

Although you know I'm not that sort of player :P

I believe it's 41 ABY?

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Born on Ord Mantell to an Ord Mantellian mother and an Adarlonian father, Jahan spent the first 7 years of his life on that planet. Eventually, the state of the economy and the death of his father's uncle back on Adarlon meant the family moved to Adarlon, where Jahan lived a happy enough life. Wanting to go into politics and help people, but aware of the nature of the Empire, Jahan decided to join the Imperial Navy instead, believing it would be the best centre for resistance, and wait for the right circumstances.

By the age of 26, Jahan was a Lieutenant Commander onboard the Carrack Adarlon 4, under the command of the minor Warlord who was in control of Adarlon. Jahan was a key member of the mutiny there and onboard the other Adarlon defence ships which allowed New Republic forces to enter and secure the system in 10 ABY. Jahan joined the New Republic Defence Force and began to work his way through the ranks, taking part in many major battles against the resurgent Remnant. Now, he is finally at peace, but remains vigilant and in command of [whatever you'd like to give me, maybe a Star Destroyer?] and holds the rank of [as high as possible, but that's your remit I think?]


Is that enough to be getting on with? :)
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 Post Posted: Tue, July 21st 2009 12:42pm    Post subject:
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Looks fine to me! :D I'm sure the others will be okay with it once they come online.
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 Post Posted: Wed, July 22nd 2009 02:09pm    Post subject:
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Application approved, Rebel girlyman. :p
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